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Poetry - Ode to the multi-artist

2018-08-24 12:23:30

Hey All,

It’s been a while since I posted. Love the positive fandom here as always. Wanted to share one of my favorite poems in ode to the many facets of art and of being an artist -much like Keanu. Hope y’all like it. m.
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My Shoes
BY CHARLES SIMIC

Shoes, secret face of my inner life:
Two gaping toothless mouths,
Two partly decomposed animal skins
Smelling of mice nests.

My brother and sister who died at birth
Continuing their existence in you,
Guiding my life
Toward their incomprehensible innocence.

What use are books to me
When in you it is possible to read
The Gospel of my life on earth
And still beyond, of things to come?

I want to proclaim the religion
I have devised for your perfect humility
And the strange church I am building
With you as the altar.

Ascetic and maternal, you endure:
Kin to oxen, to Saints, to condemned men,
With your mute patience, forming
The only true likeness of myself.
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hey...

2014-07-24 04:22

I have to confess I've spent most of my time here as a voyeur. I know, it's terrible! and illegal here right? I first found this site after witnessing a triumphant battle against a troll on IMDB. I never saw one so successful. Anakin McFly...high friggin' five! I want to be like you on the playground of adults!!! While I am a fan of Keanu Reeves I am more impressed by the idea of a group of kind internet spirits fighting crime. And the logic!!! I think trolls start to forget what they originally said with you getting so deductive on em'! So, therefore, I hope you don't mind, that I'm here for the finger kung fu lessons. And for pure entertainment..and then, I'll go see a Reeving awesome movie. PS. I think my favorite character of Keanu Reeves' is Donnie in The Gift. Dang he is full of emotion! Peace.
ODE

2014-07-24 03:58

Pardon my absence
i've been on one great river
camping in the cold!

Here is another
laugh now and cry later, sniff.
Happy day, you all.

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Little do they know,
That the cupcake is my soul.
I eat him and zen.

You should try it paps,
you trigger finger pirates.
But I will show you;

Eat some frosting man!
and walk a dark days night, once!
and be free in cake!

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Ps. Bliss your doing wonderfully.
Try now a haiku like in KR's book.
Here are the rules I found online....
(The best part of something hard is to giggle while you do it!!)

There are no specific rules for writing haiku; however, the structure of haiku is always the same, including the following features:

Only three lines, totaling 17 syllables throughout
The first line must be only 5 syllables
The second line must be comprised of 7 syllables
The third line must be 5 syllables like the first
Punctuation and capitalization rules are up to the poet, and need not follow rigid rules used in structuring sentences
Haiku does not have to rhyme, in fact many times it does not rhyme at all
Some haiku can include the repetition of words or sounds

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Next I'll try a haiku for Jack.

Bits and snippets off the web

2014-06-11 01:38

How about this one?

http://www.huffingtonpost.com/2014/06/09/speed-anniversary_n_5375581.html

ODE

2014-06-11 01:32

So many tears fall,
I wash my face with each one
Then I blow my nose.

hehe...

ODE

2014-06-11 01:26


Tanks Bliss,

Perhaps ODE's based on Keanu Characters could be fun...

for now, another melancholy satire...

Oh my lonely butt,
sitting cold on the stone stairs.
I will use the Times.

ODE

2014-06-10 00:22

PS> Whats the weird little picture in my reply boxes eh?
ODE

2014-06-10 00:21

OH! Thats how it works?! heeeeeee
ok. Here's my first try...(5,7,5)

Dear Heart, go to hell.
your sensitive mimicry
eats me live -you punk.

ODE

2014-06-06 07:31

Oh please could we start and ODE to ODE section? Our own self satirical ODEs, Keanu style? (From his colaboration book, "Ode to Happiness.")

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