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m2014-06-06 07:31


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Oh please could we start and ODE to ODE section? Our own self satirical ODEs, Keanu style? (From his colaboration book, "Ode to Happiness.")
Bliss
2014-06-06 10:54


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You made the first move, so it's already started! I will follow your lead!
MmeRenard
2014-06-06 20:27


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I'm busily not writing now.
Bliss
2014-06-06 23:24


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Hope I don't wet mysel in anticipation!
m2014-06-10 00:21


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OH! Thats how it works?! heeeeeee
ok. Here's my first try...(5,7,5)

Dear Heart, go to hell.
your sensitive mimicry
eats me live -you punk.

m2014-06-10 00:22


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PS> Whats the weird little picture in my reply boxes eh?
Bliss
2014-06-10 01:19


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I like it, M!

I will make an attempt to write one shortly. Warning word expression is not a strength of mine. Lol

The weird box is if you wish to edit or delete your post.

m2014-06-11 01:26


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Tanks Bliss,

Perhaps ODE's based on Keanu Characters could be fun...

for now, another melancholy satire...

Oh my lonely butt,
sitting cold on the stone stairs.
I will use the Times.

m2014-06-11 01:32


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So many tears fall,
I wash my face with each one
Then I blow my nose.

hehe...

Bliss
2014-06-17 11:44


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Nice, M!

I can't write any form of poetry for crap, but for humor let's see...

Pain is my only friend
It's always in my chest
Salty water doesn't sting
There.

I thought all wounds heal
Some believe in mermaids
Can we trade hearts?

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Bliss
2014-06-17 12:15


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Wait, did I write that correct? You used object and I didn't.. Let the torture continue! Lol

Hmmm

I wait for my lost lover
At the corner of heartbreak and desperation
Sipping my tears of pity
Am I already forgotten??

Your turn

nunu52
2014-07-13 19:59


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Where did you guys go? This thread is hilarious! Please continue.... :)
allhailkingjack
2014-07-13 21:44


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I love Keanu.
Fortunately he won't know,
Or I'd be restrained.

He's such a puzzle.
Only fourteen thousand more
Pieces left to go.

He is immortal.
If I were immortal too,
Bet he'd run screaming.

***********

I love Shane Falco.
Can he play just one more time?
I would cheer for him.

Shane Falco's the best.
Really rare to see a guy
So hot and so shy.

I know he's in love
With that li'l bitch Annabelle.
I would cut her up.

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Note to the lawyers: I am well aware that Shane and Annabelle are fictional characters. I've never been within spitting distance of Keanu, and I've come to terms with the fact that I never will be. Nobody has any intentions of stalking anyone in the real world or cutting anyone up in the fictional one. K?

nunu52
2014-07-19 08:56


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:D :D :D

@alhailkingjack.... you crack me up!

m2014-07-24 03:58


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Pardon my absence
i've been on one great river
camping in the cold!

Here is another
laugh now and cry later, sniff.
Happy day, you all.

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Little do they know,
That the cupcake is my soul.
I eat him and zen.

You should try it paps,
you trigger finger pirates.
But I will show you;

Eat some frosting man!
and walk a dark days night, once!
and be free in cake!

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Ps. Bliss your doing wonderfully.
Try now a haiku like in KR's book.
Here are the rules I found online....
(The best part of something hard is to giggle while you do it!!)

There are no specific rules for writing haiku; however, the structure of haiku is always the same, including the following features:

Only three lines, totaling 17 syllables throughout
The first line must be only 5 syllables
The second line must be comprised of 7 syllables
The third line must be 5 syllables like the first
Punctuation and capitalization rules are up to the poet, and need not follow rigid rules used in structuring sentences
Haiku does not have to rhyme, in fact many times it does not rhyme at all
Some haiku can include the repetition of words or sounds

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Next I'll try a haiku for Jack.

Sephonae
2014-08-13 10:41


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My kid ticked me off, incredibly, just a little while ago and I simmered so long I've been trying to cheer myself up by visiting this site (what's that thing Madeleine Kahn said in Clue, about flames on the side of her face? that's been me for the last hour.) (It was Clue, wasn't it???)

Anyway.

Thought I'd go for a limerick:

Keanu's this guy from Beirut
Whom both men and women find cute.
From his toes to his nose,
We're lost in the throes.
—if we met him, he'd render us mute.

Hmmm. Maybe I oughtta just back away from the poetry, there...

:-)

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Bliss
2014-08-13 12:14


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There was a girl named Pudgy Mary
Who got fat from eating a lot of dairy.
She grew hair between her toes
Why? Nobody knows
But when she wore sandals it was very scary.

Juvenile I know. Idk what to write a haiku about ???



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